Researching and Planning

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  1. There is some useful detail here, but you haven't proof read and at times it is a little confusing. For example just because Billboard doesn't have a skyline, doesn't mean that this isn't a convention of magazines or that your web research was unreliable! I am also unsure about why your target audience is as young as 11 is that right? At times you are simply describing what you are doing rather than reflecting on progress and changes. It does seem like you think your research and planning was stronger last year which is not a good sign and is unusual! You should be more organised and learn from last year...
    Amy

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